Friday, October 18, 2013

Essays 2-02a: My room


I like my room. My house has built since 13 years ago. When I was child, I always stayed home. But, I don’t sometimes stay home very much now. I am very busy now. I want to stay home. I talk about my room.

I talk about a relationship of my room and my house. My room is in my house. My room is eastern corner of 2F in my house. I see rice fields and pinball hall from there. The sun is good. There is my room near the bath room. I am frequent micturition.

I talk about furniture in my room. There is my bed. I always lie and sleep it. I sometimes play TV games on the bed. I feel it. There is my desk. When I do my homework, I use it. I often write letters on the desk. There is my chair. When I have something to think, I sit it.

I talk about my clothes. I have many clothes. I usually buy cheap clothes because I have no money. I like summer clothes because it is easy. I am not slim. So, I don’t look good. I like simple.

I talk about decorations. There are many pictures. They are important my memory. When I was a baby, I was taken pictures by my parents. So, I have many pictures of a baby. However, I don’t have pictures of the junior high school student very much. Maybe, I would be puberty. My room’s wall paper is white color. I want to change color it. My favorite color is red, but I don’t like red of the wall. So, I think I want to become brown color because the color makes me relax. Illumination of my room is fluorescent lamp. It isn’t light very much. So, I want to change a LED light. 

I talk about my books. There are many textbook in my room. I am university student now. I experienced elementary school and junior high school and high school and now. I gave many textbooks there.so my room is a full of textbooks. And there are many novels too. I like mystery novel the best. So, I like Agatha Christie. The novel which she writes is very interesting and it makes me excited. And there are many comics in my room. When I was child, I gathered “one piece” all. These are my important treasures.

My room is very good. I have my room is happy for me. If I live somewhere only one, I want to become there same my room now. I love my room. I thank to my parents. When I will become a parent, I want to become my parents. 
[450 words]

5 comments:

  1. fluorescent lamp is very unique.
    I think brown wall is good too.

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  2. Your favorite color is red!? I think so too! I think that your image color is red in my image. You look good in red.

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  3. Your essay is very easy to read. What is the best reason why did you choice your favorite place is your room? I laughed at Agatha Christie. I think you need to use more catcher title.

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  4. I like my room too. Do you like to decorate?

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  5. I envy your scenic room! I suggest that sometimes change your opening sentence.

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